One ought to hold on to one's heart, for if one loses that, the control of one's head is soon to follow.

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Perverted! With a capital P

I like it, I mean, it makes me not want to eat for a week... and I guess that it doesn't help that I'm watching Saw at the same time, but seems appropriate... to everything... it can be negative or positive, really. So I really like it. Very good job.

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"...but I believe errors, especially written errors, are often the only markers left by a solitary life: to sacrifice them is to lose the angles of personality, the riddle of a soul."
-Mark Z. Danielewski

Only crazy people have control of one's head.

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"...but I believe errors, especially written errors, are often the only markers left by a solitary life: to sacrifice them is to lose the angles of personality, the riddle of a soul."
-Mark Z. Danielewski

Haha thank you. And honestly, I'm not sure if it's negative or positive. I just kinda wrote it. So I guess it's up to interpretation.
and i'm glad it makes you not want to eat for a week! Well, I mean, I want you to eat. I'm just glad my imagery was effective. XD

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."

Well, it makes sense. Why should marriage be such a gentle and kind ceremony. You are signing the rest of your life away, and you made the serious implications of that clear enough in your poem. I don't think it has anything to do with cannibalism or a craving for meat.

It reminds me of the blueberry picking poem. it's so out of the ordinary because people would not expect somehting so bloody to relate to love.

Now as for your subconscious, it could have something to do with it craving children that you are consciously planning on denying to your body, since that is a very bloody affair where you offer up your body to a parasite (as Tony would say) but the result is one of the strongest kinds of love that exists.

But don't pay any attention to my analysis.

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower

Why wouldn't I pay attention to your analysis when you have the most interesting one?!? Lol. I like your interpretation.

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."

I was bored and putting off work, if you couldn't tell.

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower

Lol that's okay. I'm always up for aiding a procrastinator.

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So it goes.

"That's what writers do. We cut ourselves open and we bleed all over the page."

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~zuz

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"We accept the love we think we deserve."
-Perks of Being a Wallflower